NANOWRIMO Excerpt from Jett

27 Dec

Raul held a hand out to stop me walking. I looked at him and he was staring at the ground. I shifted my gaze to the ground also. What I saw made my heart stop, as it would whenever someone is standing on the edge of a thousand foot drop!
“Don’t move”, said Raul.
“No problem”, I said clinging to the nearest tree.
” Uvam aeuir sosa ras ik em braosrram”, Raul bellowed into the night. I figured it was some sort of ancient tongue, because he continued to ramble into the night.
“Wros ek reka’k sraosaks errikeum”, the night shouted back, after Raul had stopped bellowing.
By this time the trees were swaying and I was very confused. Where was this noise coming from? And what language is that? I feared for my life now, the tree looked like it was going to uproot and moment.
Raul bellowed once more, “Emmucamca, kae brusrar.”
All the trees stopped swaying then, just as I was about to ask what was going on, there was a loud noise like someone had set off a firecracker near my ears.
I blinked and I immediately wish I hadn’t so I didn’t missed what happened. In the empty space of the hole a red and black ‘thing’ appeared in front of the pair.
I think Raul was trying to yell something to me but I couldn’t hear him over the roar of the spinning, now giant portal. Raul took my arm and I took a step forward then realized there was no ground in front of me. I started falling through the cloud of swirling red and black mist.

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3 Responses to “NANOWRIMO Excerpt from Jett”

  1. Kelsey Gray December 27, 2012 at 2:18 am #

    Amazing Jett!!! love it!

  2. ncross5 January 5, 2013 at 3:00 pm #

    Woah!! I can’t wait to hear what happens next!! XD

  3. Michaela K. February 4, 2013 at 6:13 pm #

    I would pay actual money to read the rest of this

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