I once loved one so round and dear
He knew I loved him so
I’d hold him close, he’d kiss my nose
Yes, this was my true love
With big brown eyes, a button nose
How cute and so divine
I’ll love him to the very end
Yes, the very end of time
He was my first my very first
So original and unique
He was the smallest of his kind
But perfect just for me
I admit I made some bad mistakes
The way I dealt with him
Was I the reason for his death?
Why the breath of life left him?
I cannot change or reverse the time
I must continue life
But if I were to go back again
I’d tell him “I love you,” one more time
I cannot changed what happened
What happened, that must stay
But I can change the future
By learning now, today
I learned to treat you better
I learned to be more kind
If that is why you left me
My heart has broken seven times
I really am so sorry
I love you very much
I didn’t mean to take away
Your unique soul from this earth
Your family might be hurting I hope they’re still alive Jack I love you very much
Jack I wish you hadn’t died
I loved this! It is so special, lovely, and just plain amazing! Great job!
Thanks Abigail!
Wow, Dejah. This is just great. If you don’t mind me asking, is this based on a true story?
–Jordan H.
Thanks Jordan and Katie! And thanks for asking Jordan and believe it or it is a true story but not about a boy but about my bunny Jack I had when I was a little kid. He was my first pet and I loved him with all my heart so this poem was dedicated to him. And i know it may seem like it was about a boy but I wanted to trick the reader and make them think a certain way Lol.
Really glad you guys liked it!!!!!
I think this is one of the best poems I’ve read in a while. Great job; you’re excellent at poem writing
Thanks Katie!