Dear my dear by Gabrielle H.

Too bad you’re not here

Too bad you’re not mine

Your words tug upon my ears

And make my soul shine

This is a dark world

I was left alone, sad, on the floor, curled

Your songs gave me strength

They brought me back to life

You went the distance, you went the length

And got rid of all my strife

Too bad you’re not near

Too bad I’m too young

This leaves me in tears

You tighten my lungs

You’re tearing me apart

You tug upon my heart

Either way it’d be doomed from the start


Posted on April 9, 2018, in Student Writing. Bookmark the permalink. 7 Comments.

  1. This hits me hard on a personal level. Incredible poem filled with intense emotion. Amazing job.

  2. Wow. This is a very tense, heart-stricken poem. This is simply amazing. Great job Gabrielle!

  3. Gabrielle Lovell

    Holy cow this is amazing Gabrielle. Its such raw emotion with a deep grip, very passionate and very beautiful. I applaud you for writing something so amazingly heartfelt. ‘Applauds’ ❤

  4. This is beautifully written Gabrielle! Great job 🙂

  5. Bridget Bishop

    Good job on this poem Gabrielle.

  6. This was a beautiful piece, Gabrielle!

  7. My goodness, amazing job, Gabrielle. I love this with all my heart. ❤ 🙂

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