The Panic Room

by Natasha K.

Somewhere no one can escape,
The panic room can make and break
Inside, it breaks
Outside, it makes

No one ever hears your screams
Deranged, it seems,
But your fears disagree

And if you manage to survive,
Its not quite clear if you’re truly alive,
Because no matter what,
You’re dead inside.

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Posted on November 29, 2018, in 2018-2019, Poetry, Student Writing. Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. I forgot I even wrote this XD

  2. This is really good Riddle! I like the descriptions and how its something people don’t generally write poetry about, yet you did and it turned out pretty amazing. Great job! 🙂

  3. Dark but interesting. My kind of poem.

  4. I enjoyed reading this poem. I really love poems that delineate a sort of darkness, as it really creates an interesting vibe. The descriptions you implemented are great as well that communicate the aspects of the “unknown” about the panic room. Great work on this piece. It was well done.

  5. I love this one! Its so dark and interesting, its amazing overall!! Youre a great writer !! When I first saw the title I immediately thought of the song Panic Room by Au/Ra

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